tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1893148483614471275.post6290191755087758994..comments2023-08-11T23:52:04.154-04:00Comments on Under The Influence: Chapter SevenSuper_Kiwihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18000771355101318462noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1893148483614471275.post-26364957600559355432009-03-26T02:20:00.000-04:002009-03-26T02:20:00.000-04:00Okay--this is one of my favorite songs. So random...Okay--this is one of my favorite songs. So random and sexy--it fit the chapter perfectly.<BR/><BR/>Loved the sexual beat to the song--it seemed to match them in every way. A little gritty--a little dirty--a whole lot sexy. Really great writing and choice.<BR/><BR/>Now--Colby's actually thinking about him in a non sexual way to help him out? That's a new facet to her personality. <BR/><BR/>Interesting test to the relationship.TaraLeighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00342413692746814980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1893148483614471275.post-21039790701832218812009-03-22T19:09:00.000-04:002009-03-22T19:09:00.000-04:00I just stopped fanning myself to write this... HOL...I just stopped fanning myself to write this... HOLY CRAP THAT WAS HOT! LOL<BR/>This is going to get pretty serious pretty soon<BR/>Can we have the next chapter please?!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1893148483614471275.post-14928594935115142009-03-12T09:07:00.000-04:002009-03-12T09:07:00.000-04:00Whew, that was SOME dance! Very tastefully done, ...Whew, that was SOME dance! Very tastefully done, and extremely erotic. I chuckled at Jon's almost disappointment that nobody noticed what they were doing...<BR/><BR/>I have to agree with Judith -- it seems that this is building into more than just a little fling. If it doesn't kill them, that is.<BR/><BR/>~ HathThe Goddess Hathorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06001211619053692699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1893148483614471275.post-23037900524240488042009-03-12T03:55:00.000-04:002009-03-12T03:55:00.000-04:00They did it in the club? Whohoooo Colby will get h...They did it in the club? Whohoooo Colby will get him in some serious trouble soon ;) <BR/>But holy shit, this was HOT! <BR/>Hmmm...it seems the once just for fun connection between them is slowly getting more serious. The way she wants to know what´s going on and what his problems are. And she starts to take care of him and try to make him feel better. <BR/>And Jon, hmm, is it just a small step from want and won´t miss someone anymore... He´s already thinking about it....Judithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08086532905120600182noreply@blogger.com